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■3289 / ResNo.30)  #3253スペルチェック
  
□投稿者/ 白い都 -(2005/06/07(Tue) 19:12:35)
    Come [foward / forward].

    Reynald de Chatillon will be [panished / punished].

    We have [decieded /decided] that you shall take command of the army of Jerusalem.
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■3290 / ResNo.31)  QにA:両過激派の止め役
□投稿者/ ハーブ -(2005/06/07(Tue) 19:38:20)
    今回は要点のみ前置き抜きで失礼します。

    >バリアンをティベリアスに引き合わせるシーンでのホスピタラーの台詞が
    >その直前のティベリアスの台詞と合わせていまいち流れがよくわかりません。

    >Tiberias : But Saladin and the king between them would make a better world.

    図解できたら一発なのですが(^^;)
    themとは、「戦いたがっている馬鹿者ども」これはキリスト教徒側にもイスラム教徒側にもいる。
    ボードワンIV世は、ルノーやギィが今以上に暴発しないように抑える努力をしている。サラディンもまた自陣営の過激な主戦派を抑えている(「なぜ撤退する?」と抗議していた若いのが好例)。もし英明な両君主がいなければ、あちらとこちらの主戦派どうしが直接、戦いを交えることになる。
    今それを食い止めている状況が、Saladin and the King between themであり、
    その両君主ならば「より良き世を作ることだろう」。

    >The Hospitalar : It lives only for a while, but (it?) still has lived.
    「より良き世、は長くは続かないでしょうけど、それでもすでに実現していますよ」
    というのが、私の現時点での解釈です。
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■3292 / ResNo.32)  ありがとうございます
□投稿者/ ハーブ -(2005/06/07(Tue) 19:44:14)
    いつもお世話になっております m( _ _ )m

    今回は、抗議手紙出すでなし、またスクリプト本が出るの分かってて全脚本htmlにして置くわけにもいかないのですが、こうなると部分ごとにもせよきれいに整えた形にしたくなってしまいますが。
    個人的現実的にそこまでの余裕はないなあ・・・
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■3293 / ResNo.33)  スペルチェック
□投稿者/ 白い都 -(2005/06/07(Tue) 19:57:04)
    ([Unkown / Unknown]):  ←しょうもないことで、すみません
    What is this?

    Tiberius※:
    You are your father's son. He was my [frind / friend]. I'm yours.
    ※英語綴りは Tiberias
     でも字幕は「ティベリウス」だった。パンフや公式サイトは「ティベリアス」と表記。
     バリアンの発音では「タィベーリアス」と聞こえる・・・

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■3294 / ResNo.34)  サラディンの台詞 (要補完)
□投稿者/ One of many -(2005/06/08(Wed) 07:52:39)
    2005/06/09(Thu) 23:28:05 編集(投稿者)
    2005/06/09(Thu) 00:01:58 編集(投稿者)
    2005/06/08(Wed) 19:24:46 編集(投稿者)
    2005/06/08(Wed) 07:58:15 編集(投稿者)

    このところの暑さでヘタレております。氷の杯が欲しい…

    ハーブ様の分析(No.3281, 3290)へのお礼レスを後回しにするのは
    心苦しいのですが、サラディンとティベリアスの台詞アップを優先させました。
    雑な作業なのでまたしてもポカ満載の悪寒。
    (白い都さま、お手数をおかけしました)
    恥さらしの可能性におびえつつ、どうせアップするなら
    少しでも早い方がいいかと判断した次第です。


    既に他スレにアップされている部分は省略しました。後日コピペいたします。
    -----------------------------------------------------------
    (Why did we retire? Why?)
    God did not favor him.
    God alone determines the results of battles.)
    The results of battles are determined by God.
    But also by preparation, numbers, absence of disease, and availability of water.
    One(We?) cannot maintain a siege with (the)enemy behind.
    How many battles did God win for Islam before I came?
    that is, before God determined that I should come.
    (??? That's because we were sinful.)
    It is because you were unprepared.
    (If you think that way, you shall not be king for long.)
    When I'm not king, I (shall ???) for Islam.
    Thank you for your visit.

    I did not give the cup to you.
    (Reynald : No. My lord.)
    A king does not kill a king.
    Were you not close enough to a great king to learn (by his ??? )


    Godfrey? Godfrey nearly killed me in the Lebanon. Truly.
    I did not know he had a son.
    (It was his son at Kerak.)
    The one you let live?

    (Mercy.)
    No. I cannot.

    Will you yield the city?
    (Balian : Before I lose it, I will burn it to the ground. Your holy land is ours.
    Every (last?) thing in Jerusalem drives men mad.)
    I wonder it would not be better if you didn't. Will you destroy it?
    (Balian : Every Christian knight you kill will take ten Saracens with him.
    You will destroy your army here and never raise another.
    I swear to God, to take the city will be the end of you.)
    Your city is full of women and children.
    If my army will die, so will your city.
    (Balian : You offer terms. I ask none.)
    I will give every soul safe conduct to the Christian lands. Every soul.
    Women, children, the old, all your knights and soldiers, and your queen.
    No one will be hurt. I swear to God.
    (Balian : The Christians butchered every Muslim within the walls when they took the city.)
    I am not those men. I am Salah-a-din. Salah a-Din.
    (Balian : Then under these terms, I surrender Jerusalem.)
    Salam aleikom.
    (Balian : And peace be with you.)

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■3295 / ResNo.35)  ティベリアスの台詞(要補完)
□投稿者/ One of many -(2005/06/08(Wed) 08:01:25)
    2005/06/09(Thu) 23:39:33 編集(投稿者)
    2005/06/08(Wed) 21:11:40 編集(投稿者)
    2005/06/08(Wed) 20:08:03 編集(投稿者)
    2005/06/08(Wed) 08:03:23 編集(投稿者)

    補足&手直ししました。

    懺悔:ティベリアスに王様をitと呼ばせてしまいました。it 扱いだなんて
       王を「あの病人」と呼んだルノー並かそれ以上に失礼な発言ですね。
       慌てていたからとはいえ何という失態。
       自己嫌悪に陥りつつ己を馬叩き棒(…は我が家に無いため孫の手あたり)で
       しばきに行って参ります。
        


    (Reynald : Who says I raid !)
    That witness, all of Jerusalem, holy God---
    and me.
    (Reynald : That witness is, if you call (?), a Saracen. He lies. )
    (?) will come a day, Reynald, when you are not protected by your title.
    (Reynald : When will it be?
    Will that be (???)the kingdom of heaven arrived?
    Those Templars have been hung for the raid (that) I know you commanded.
    (Reynald : Prove it ! I will wait at Kerak until you do.)
    The king will take your castle at Kerak.
    (Reynald : Try to take it, Tiberias. I'll be there.)


    (The Hospitaler : My lord...)
    That's true. You are your father's son. He was my friend.
    I'm yours.
    Godfrey (?)dead. He could have(以下不明).

    It is shouted in the streets that you killed a great lord of Syria.
    Saladin himself sent word (that) your fight did not breach peace,
    (but) you had cause.
    What know you of Saladin?
    (Balian : That he is the king of Saracens, and he surrounds this kingdom.)
    He has 200,000 men(?) in Damascus alone. He can win (???) when he goes to war,
    (???) by Templar (?) like Reynald.)
    But Saladin and the king between them would make a better world.
    (The Hospitalar : It lives only for a while, but it still has lived.)

    What did your father tell you of your obligations?
    (Balian : That I (was???) to be a good knight.)
    Then, I pray the world and Jerusalem (can?)accommodate such rarity
    ----as a perfect knight.
    Have you dined?


    How many knights did you find in France?
    (Guy : Fifty.)
    (?) All have allegiance to the king?
    (Guy : Of course, Tiberias. Obviously. (To Balian) You sit at MY table?)
    (Balian : Is it not the king's table?)
    (Guy : Is it? I have not seen the king at it for some years.
    I cannot eat. I'm (???) about company.
    In France, this could not inherit, but here,
    there are no civilized rules. I have business in the East.
    My wife does not lament my absence(s) .
    That is either the very best of wives,
    or very, very worst.)
    You go to meet Reynald.
    (Guy : No. He is (in this???). I am a member of this court.
    Why should I make leave(?) with a troublemaker.)
    (To Sibylla) To the very best of wives!

    The king will(?) see Godfrey's son.


    Reynald de Chatillon, with the Templars, have attacked a Saracen caravan.
    Silence !
    (It was no caravan. It was the army heading/headed?
    for Bethlehem to (disgrace both ???)
    Saladin will (come into?) this.
    (Guy : (?) Tiberias sure knows more about Saladin's intentions than ???)
    (To Guy) I would rather live with men than kill them.
    This is certainly why you are alive.
    (Guy : That sort of Christianity has its uses.)
    We must not go to war. We do not want it. and (we?) may not win.
    (Blasphemy ! )
    (The army of Jesus Christ which bears a holy cross cannot be beaten!)
    (Guy : And Tiberias suggests that it could be?)
    (There must be war ! God wills it!)
    (Guy : God wills it!)
    Sile---nce !!
    (King Baldwin : Oh. Saladin has crossed the Jordan with 200,000 men.)
    He will make (?) for Kerak and Reynald de Chatillon...
    My lord...



    (Reynald : What are you looking at?)
    The dead (???). Reynald de Chatillon, you are arrested (???)
    (To Balian) I need you in Jerusalem.


    Why do you protect Guy? He is the man who insults you, hates you,
    kills you himself when he has a chance.
    (?) For the salvation of this kingdom.
    Would it be so hard to marry Sibylla?
    Jerusalem has no need of a perfect knight.
    (Balian : No. It is a kingdom of conscience. Or nothing.)


    (We should meet the enemy of God!)
    (Guy : So shall we!)
    Then, you do so without my knight.
    (Guy : I will take your glory, Tiberias.
    You had yours years and years ago. It is time for mine!)


    (Balian : If Saladin is finished with Guy, he will come.
    We must (look to?) the defenses. )
    The king is dead. Jerusalem along with him.

    I've given my whole life to Jerusalem. Everything.
    First, I thought we... we're fighting for God.
    And I realized (that) we are fighting for the wealth and land.
    I was ashamed.

    There is no more Jerusalem.
    I shall go to Cyprus. Will you come with me?
    (Balian : No.)
    You are your father's son.
    Saladin moves his army from water to water.
    (At least?) four days... maybe five.
    God be with you. He is no longer with me.
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■3298 / ResNo.36)  さらに 「い」抜き言葉
□投稿者/ One of many -(2005/06/08(Wed) 19:30:25)
    age目的半分の投稿です。

    「い」抜き言葉といえば、ボードワンW世の
    "when playing with the other boys..."に
    「(他の少年たちと?)遊ん”でて”」という字幕があてられていたような
    気がします。字数減らしを意図したものでしょうが
    あれでは小さい子供の言葉みたいで威厳ぶち壊し。
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■3299 / ResNo.37)  スペルチェック
□投稿者/ 白い都 -(2005/06/08(Wed) 20:00:50)
    現段階で見つかった箇所を上げます。

    Then, I pray the world and Jerusalem would [accomodate / accommodate] such rarity as a perfect knight.
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■3300 / ResNo.38)  ゴッドフリーの台詞 (要補完)
□投稿者/ One of many -(2005/06/09(Thu) 21:31:26)
    2005/06/10(Fri) 19:51:59 編集(投稿者)
    2005/06/09(Thu) 23:35:32 編集(投稿者)

    やはり今回も失敗の数々が投稿後に発覚しました。単語を差し替えた際、
    続く部分をそれに合わせて変えるのを忘れていて大ボケ状態になっていたり等々。
    (あのような恥ずかしい代物が日中皆様の目にさらされていたとは…)
    帰宅後に気づいてコソコソと修正したところです。


    (The Hostpitaler : You know this place, my lord?)
    (?) Yes. I knew all of it.

    (The Hospitaler : The blacksmith is the man you seek. His name is Balian.
    (???) he mourns. Buried (when we passed the crossroad?) was his wife.
    A child died. She was overcome with grief and killed herself.)
    You still advise what you advised (up)on the road?
    (The Hospitaler : I do, My lord.)

    Leave me with this man.
    (To Balian)
    I am sorry that you lost your wife and child. I also lost.
    Some say Jerusalem is the very center of the world for asking forgiveness.
    For myself, I call it here, now.
    I knew your mother. To be courteous I should say that it was against
    her objections. But I did not force her. I loved her in my fashion.
    Balian, I'm your father. I have forgiveness to ask of you.
    I am Baron of Ibelin. I have one hundred men (armed???) in Jerusalem.
    If you come with me, you will have a living and (???)
    (Balian : Whatever/Whoever? you are, my lord, my place is here.)
    What made (???) your place is now dead.
    You will never see me again. If you want anything of me, take it now.
    (Balian : I want nothing.)
    I am sorry (???) chores. God protect you.

    Jerusalem is easy to find. Go to where the man speak Italian,
    continue till they speak something else.
    We go by Messina. Good bye.

    You've come to kill me? Even these days, it is not easy. Well ?
    (Balian : I have done. Murder. )
    Haven't we all ?
    (Balian : Is it true, in Jerusalem I can erase my sins?
    And those of my wife? Is it true? )
    We can find it together. Show me your hand.

    Take it up. (???)
    (The Hospitaler : His hand is hurt, My lord.)
    I fought two days with an arrow through my testicle.
    Never use a low guard. You fight well, let's work on your skills.
    Take a high guard. Italians call it "(???)", (the) guard of a hawk.
    You strike from high. Sword straighter. Take back. Bend your knees.
    Defend yourself. (The?)Blade isn't the only part of a/the? sword.
    Sword straighter. Attack !

    What's this?
    (You are with the man, Balian, who killed a priest. I am (???)
    Lord bishop to bring him back.)
    (Balian : What he says is true. They have the right to take me.)
    (中略)
    (Just give him to me. I'll fight for something else. He is a murderer.)
    So am I. Whoever dies here today, you will certainly be among them.
    (You are a lord. I must ???.)

    Thank the bishop for his love !!

    (The Hospitaler : You broke an arrow. If the ribs are broken,
    marrow may enter the blood, in which case you take a fever and die.
    Or(?) a cyst forms, you will live. You are in the hands of God.)
    I can miss more wine.
    (To Balian) It was not,they had no right to take you.
    It was the way they asked.
    (Balian : They had the right to take me.)
    So do I.

    Do you know what lies in the Holy Land ? A new world.
    (?) The man who in France had no house is in Holy Land the master
    of the city. He, who was the master of the city, begs in a gutter.
    There, at the end of the world, you are not what you are born,
    but what you have it in yourself to be.
    (Balian : What I (???) is forgiveness. That's all I want.)
    Whatever your position, you are of my house.
    That means, you will serve the king of Jerusalem.
    (Balian : What could/would? ask the king a man like me?)
    A better world than has ever been seen.
    A kingdom of conscience. A kingdom of heaven.
    There is peace between Christians and Muslims (who could live?) together.
    (?) War, between Saladin and the king, (will ???).
    Did you think that lay at the end of the crusade? It does.
    Balian, you are all that survives me. Do not disappoint me.

    (The Hospitaler : (???) on your knees.)
    Be without fear in the face of your enemies.
    Be brave and upright that God may love thee.
    Speak the truth, always, even if it leads to your death.
    Safeguard the helpless and do no wrong.
    That is your oath. It hurts, so you remember it.
    (The Hospitaler : Rise a knight, Baron of Ibelin.)

    Defend the king. If the king is no more, protect the people.
    (The Hospitaler : This time you confess to holy God, not your son.
    Are you sorry for all your sins?)
    All, but one.
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■3302 / ResNo.39)   サラディンの台詞 (補完)
□投稿者/ ハーブ -(2005/06/10(Fri) 01:21:49)
    2005/06/10(Fri) 23:01:40 編集(投稿者)

    現時点での the best I can です。脚本らしい体裁に変えました。
    ---------
    Mullah(Khaled Nabawy):
     Why did we retire? Why? God did not favor him.
     God alone determines the results of battles.

    Saladin:
      The results of battles are determined by God.
      But also by preparation, numbers, the absence of disease, and the availability of water.
     One cannot maintain a siege with the enemy behind.
     How many battles did God win for Islam(-iski?) before I came?
     That is, before God determined that I should come.

    Mullah:
     Sure enough. That's because we were sinful.

    Saladin:
     It is because you were unprepared.

    Mullah:
     If you think that way, you shall not be king for long.

    Saladin:
      When I'm not king, I grieve for Islam.
     Thank you for your visit.
     Thank you for your visit.

    Mullah:
     You promised. You promised to return Jerusalem.
     Don't forget.
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    Saladin:(to Reynold)
     I did not give the cup to you.

    Reynold:
     No. My lord.

    Saladin:(to Guy)
     A king does not kill a king.
     Were you not close enough to a great king to learn by his example?  

    (examplingと聞こえますが…意味は「手本、模範」でしょう)

    -----------
    Saladin:
     Who defends?

    Nasir(イマド):
     Ballian of Ibelin, son of Godfrey.

    Saladin:
     Godfrey? Godfrey nearly killed me in Lebanon. Truly.
     I did not know he had a son.

    Nasir(イマド):
     It was his son at Kerak.

    Saladin: The one you let live?
    Nasir(イマド): Yes.
    Saladin:
     Perhaps you should not have.

    Nasir(イマド):
     Perhaps. I should have had a different teacher.

    ----------------
    (Mercy.)
     No. I cannot.

    ----------------
    Saladin:
     When you yield the city?

    Balian :
     Before I lose it, I will burn it to the ground. Your holy places, ours.
     Every last thing in Jerusalem that drives men mad.

    Saladin:
     I wonder it would not be better if you did. You will destroy it?

    Balian :
     Every Christian knight you kill will take ten Saracens with him.
     You will destroy your army here and never raise another, I swear to God.
     To take the city will be the end of you.

    Saladin:
     Your city is full of women and children.
      If my army will die, so will your city.

    Balian :
     You offer terms. I ask none.

    Saladin:
     I will give every soul safe conduct to the Christian lands. Every soul.
     The women, the children, the old, and all your knights and soldiers, and your queen.
      No one will be hurt. I swear to God.

    Balian :
     The Christians butchered every Muslim within the walls when they took the city.

    Saladin:
     I am not those men. I am Salah-a-din. Salah a-Din.

    Balian :
     Then under these terms, I surrender Jerusalem.

    Saladin: Salam aleikom.
    Balian : And peace be with you.

    Balian : What is Jerusalem worth?

    Saladin: Nothing.
    ...Everythig.
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