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＞comment：＊＊[Subtitle in theater virsion] Everyone feels that way when he's having a hard time. It is too rate to regret. So you'd better think what you should do at the moment.
＞The error of "It is too rate to regret." was revised, but "a hard time" is still remained.

まずミス訂正だけしておきます。

virsion⇒ version
too rate ⇒ too late
is still remained. ⇒ still remains.
(remain は受身になりません。)

comment：として、いきなり[Subtitle in theater virsion]と来ると見て奇異なので、引用した部分全体をどう書き直すか考えて、案を出します。（内容は手を加えないつもりです）