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A translation of the main part of
The Official Announcement about TTT Translation
by Nippon Herald Films Inc. and Shochiku Co., Ltd
Posted on the officila Website on December 25th, 2002


(1)
On the TTT trailer, we took a very exceptional way to translate. We asked Ms. Akiko Tanaka (co-translator of the original books for Japanese) to translate the whole script, and Ms. Natsuko Toda made the subtitles from Akiko Tanaka's translated whole script.

Natsuko Toda's subtitle transcript was checked by Akiko Tanaka and Hyoronsha (publisher of the Japanese edition books) again, for finalizing.

For the dubbed version, we entrusted Mr. Katsushige Hirata, who worked on the same job for FotR, with making the script based on the Hyoronsha's preliminary translation. The final script was checked by Akiko Tanaka and Hyoronsha.

(2)
As for the TTT theatrical version, we got the English script (Final draft) and a video for translation in mid-October. Natsuko Toda checked the script and the video, and numbered the lines of the English script. And then we entrusted Hyoronsha with translating the whole script, and asked Akiko Tanaka to check it.

After receiving the final English script, translation for the additional part of script was done by Hyoronsha, and subtitling by Natsuko Toda started in mid-November. Now the pre-release version of Japanese subtitle transcript has been made and has been checked by Akiko Tanaka and Hyoronsha.

From now on, Natsuko Toda, referring to opinions by Akiko Tanaka and the others, will finalize the subtitle transcript by making necessary adjustments. We are planning to have a preview of the print with those Japanese subtitles, and to make the final corrections.


(3)
We are going through a similar process on the Japanese dubbed version. The preliminary translation by Hyoronsha was handed to Katsushige Hirata. Now the pre-release version script has been made, and Akiko Tanaka and Hyoronsha are checking it. We are planning to complete the dubbed print in the end of January.

4)
We have made an agreement with them to put their names as follows.

The subtitled version print will be preceded by these lines:
The Japanese subtitles: Natsuko Toda
In collaboration with: Akiko Tanaka Hyouronsha

In the dubbed version's end credit "Staff & Cast for the dubbed version," we intend to put the names as we did on FotR; Translation: Katsushige Hirata, Collaboration: Akiko Tanaka, Hyouronsha and other names of people who helped us on the translation.


Recently, in an interview on NZTV, the director Peter Jackson has made a statement that the translator for TTT had been changed in Japan. But it was totally a surprise to us. We are trying to find out what he really meant through New Line Cinema Inc. However we haven't received any answer yet.

If we receive a comment or a message from him directly, we will let you know.

前触れの「最終案に向けて」の中の次のところ
＞(1)の２段落の冒頭の「Toda's subtitle〜」だけは、名字のみです。
これ、訂正します。
一度アップして読み直してから、直前の文に、「フルネーム's 〜」の例があったのに気づきました（間抜けだ〜^^;）

そういうわけで、
＞初出時に　Ms./Mr.　を付ける、以降はフルネームで敬称なし、という形でOKでしょうか。これで良しなら、チェックはしました。
これが、全文に適用されてます。

あ、上の「最終案」自体は、一度削除してから、訂正済みです。＞白い都さん
両方上げてから気づいたので、前触れカキコの方は削除がきかなかったのでした(^^;

何度もすみません。

下から２番目のPJ発言の段落の第１文
＞the director Peter Jackson has made a statement
これは、過去形の方がよかったかなと、今になって思いました。
（もしかしたら、表現添削と同時に時制添削でもあったのかも…？）

最初の私の案では、PJのコメントがあったところだ（現在完了）→それ以前にまったく聞いてなかった（過去完了）というつもりで時制を考えていたのですが。後半が「それには全く驚いた（過去）」になったので、それに対応させるとすると「PJのコメントがあった（過去）」のほうが適切なような気がします。ただ、私自身は、時制表現でも曖昧さが残っているので、再確認、お願いします。＞ハーブさん

一応、私の思うところの修正案、↓段落ごと書いておきます。（has１つを削除しただけです）
Recently, in an interview on NZTV, the director Peter Jackson made a statement that the translator for TTT had been changed in Japan. But it was totally a surprise to us. We are trying to find out what he really meant through New Line Cinema Inc. However we haven't received any answer yet.

これは過去形が正しいです。ご指摘ありがとうございました。

ここのつ様、本当にありがとうございました。今回のご助力なしには、とうてい私単独で日ヘラ告知なんて英訳できなかったです。最後のチェック入れました。直した英文のアップは、多分今日は皆様お勤めに出ておられるでしょうから、午後あまり遅くならないうちに私がやります。

いつもは即レス魔(笑)の白い都さまは本業ご多忙なのかPC不調なのか、☆手紙本文だけは差出人ご本人の意見を伺いたかった☆のですが。それを待たずに最終手直しにかかるしかないか。
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(1)
On the TTT trailer, we took a very exceptional way to translate. We asked Ms. Akiko Tanaka (co-translator of the original books for Japanese) to translate the whole script, and Ms. Natsuko Toda made the subtitles from Akiko Tanaka's translated whole script.

最後の方、再度固有名詞田中明子を出すのは英語的に奇異だしもとの和文も単に「全訳」なので
＞ from Akiko Tanaka's translated whole script.
⇒ from this complete translation.

(2) ３番目の段落
From now on, Natsuko Toda, referring to opinions by Akiko Tanaka and the others, will finalize the subtitle transcript by making necessary adjustments. We are planning to have a preview of the print with those Japanese subtitles, and to make the final corrections.

＞「今後の作業は、」From now on
ちょっと口語的すぎて浮いている気がするのと、「今までと違って今後は」のような感じがする… 「残る作業は」の意味で考えることにして、確信はないながら
⇒The rest of the subtitle making process will be as follows: Natsuko Toda will finalize the subtitle transcript by making necessary adjustments, referring to opinions by Akiko Tanaka and the others.
最後の前置詞が by でいいのかどうか迷いが残る。

4)
＞In collaboration with: Akiko Tanaka Hyouronsha
単純ミス。評論社のローマ字表記がここだけ違う。

最後の方
＞has made a statement
既出。